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  1. Posted: August 29, 2012In: Public

    A fireman is haunted by the flaming ghost of a man he failed to save from a burning building as it starts burning the survivors to death.

    Eshbaal
    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 1:21 am

    The ghost is indeed burning the survivors. What I felt was at stake for the fireman was the guilt of it all - due to the nature of the logline, there was a detail that seemed hard to fit in there. A lot of people in lines of work where they save lives are actually trained to leave behind lost causesRead more

    The ghost is indeed burning the survivors.

    What I felt was at stake for the fireman was the guilt of it all – due to the nature of the logline, there was a detail that seemed hard to fit in there. A lot of people in lines of work where they save lives are actually trained to leave behind lost causes and instead save as many others as they can. What is supposed to happen here is that the ghost is someone he LEFT for the sake of others – and when those others start showing up as crisps and he realizes he is being haunted, that’s where the guilt would kick in and he has to stop it.

    While I understand where you’re coming from and am very sorry to hear of your experience, I sort of feel it’s smearing it on a bit “too thick” in this particular story. Please don’t understand this the wrong way. This sort of an action/horror thing, and sine we’re already dealing with burn victims, I just don’t feel it necessary to pile on additional misery.

    But we’ll see, it’s really just in idea stages. Thank you very much for your input.

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  2. Posted: August 28, 2012In: Public

    When an amenable young man gets cold feet on the eve of his wedding, he incurs the wrath of his jilted bride's unhinged family and is forced to literally fight for his freedom.

    Eshbaal
    Added an answer on August 29, 2012 at 5:12 pm

    Is this intended as a straight- up action movie, or more of an action-comedy thing? Cause it seems to very much relate to the latter, and I personally think that's the best direction to go with it. I quite like this one, sounds like it would be a lot of fun to watch, depending on which way you go wiRead more

    Is this intended as a straight- up action movie, or more of an action-comedy thing? Cause it seems to very much relate to the latter, and I personally think that’s the best direction to go with it. I quite like this one, sounds like it would be a lot of fun to watch, depending on which way you go with it. Is it a super-violent flick or more of a slapstick action? I feel like there could be a keyword or two in here that answered these questions a bit more – OR that it could play around with expectations for either.

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2012In: Public

    A stranded hockey team must fight for survival against the harsh Canadian winter… and a horde of time-travelling Nazi zombies.

    Eshbaal
    Added an answer on August 29, 2012 at 4:53 pm

    Well... while I love a fun zombie film and I do like the idea of the survivors being a hockey team, I really have to sigh a little at the nazi zombies. Thing is, the whole "for extra scary, insert nazi" thing is getting really, really old really, really fast. Why do they hav to be nazis? Is there reRead more

    Well… while I love a fun zombie film and I do like the idea of the survivors being a hockey team, I really have to sigh a little at the nazi zombies. Thing is, the whole “for extra scary, insert nazi” thing is getting really, really old really, really fast. Why do they hav to be nazis? Is there really any reason for that when they can just be Canadian Hockey Zombies instead – which is really both more unique and a hell of a lot more fun?

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