1. Posted: November 6, 2017In:

    When homicidal maniac escapes his cell in a locked-down mental health institution, greenhorn security guard must take a stand to survive and protect other patients.

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    Hey JanCabal, Good job! Sounds really interesting, something for a low budget film with only a few locations. Will this be a short or a feature? I cannot make it better at the moment. Thanks! Aschwin

    Hey JanCabal,

    Good job!
    Sounds really interesting, something for a low budget film with only a few locations.
    Will this be a short or a feature?
    I cannot make it better at the moment.

    Thanks!

    Aschwin

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2017In:

    A smart real estate agent, has the career of a lifetime but her married life is an exact opposite of what she pretends it to be. One morning brings about secrets and lies that send her down a rabbit hole.

    Fandango1980 Logliner

    Hi Lz, Thank you for sharing your logline with us! A logline needs 3 parts... A protoganist an antagonist (force) and a goal. What we now have is a discription of a protoganist and her goal is to make her family life as exciting as her job? Who or what is holding her back (antagonist)? Let us know!Read more

    Hi Lz,

    Thank you for sharing your logline with us!
    A logline needs 3 parts… A protoganist an antagonist (force) and a goal.
    What we now have is a discription of a protoganist and her goal is to make her family life as exciting as her job?
    Who or what is holding her back (antagonist)?

    Let us know!

    Thanks,

    Aschwin

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2017In:

    An Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.

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    Hey Ryan, Thank you for sharing your logline. I miss the stakes in this logline. What if Google refuses to build a mobile empire in his living room? Thanks, Aschwin

    Hey Ryan,

    Thank you for sharing your logline.
    I miss the stakes in this logline.
    What if Google refuses to build a mobile empire in his living room?

    Thanks,

    Aschwin

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