Hello,

I can’t understand what is the main idea of the movie. If it’s just a revenge movie I think it’s not original enough.
An unbord child is mentioned, it seems to me an useless detail (a slaughtered family is enough, no need to add the details about all the members of the family – unless the unborn child have some peculiar interest in the story, which should be clear if it is the case).

The thing that seems more promising?is the fact that the murderer is her best friend, so I would start to build from this – and push it harder.
“When a pregnant?newlywed discover that her husband is the werewolf who slaughtered her family, she…”
Tell me what happens and this is a movie I woul like to see!
What I’m trying to say is that in horror you have to come up with at least one original detail to succed.

Anyway, if the fact that the werewolf is her best friend is “just” a final reveal, it’s a 5 seconds scene and it shouldn’t be mentioned in the logline.

Watch “dog soldiers”, an excellent movie about werewolfs.