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  1. Posted: November 3, 2013In: Public

    When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 12, 2013 at 12:54 pm

    Well, the link is correct and active. Of course the script is written. For now I forward the script only to possible buyers. The definite title is SWASTIKA. Have a look at http://fjwohlert.wix.com/swastika

    Well, the link is correct and active. Of course the script is written. For now I forward the script only to possible buyers. The definite title is SWASTIKA. Have a look at http://fjwohlert.wix.com/swastika

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  2. Posted: November 5, 2013In: Public

    A middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 4:14 pm

    A charming, quirky, charismatic or divorced Canadian. Or a word on his profession. I still question the need to impart the LA and alimony part of his ex in the logline.

    A charming, quirky, charismatic or divorced Canadian. Or a word on his profession. I still question the need to impart the LA and alimony part of his ex in the logline.

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  3. Posted: November 3, 2013In: Public

    When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 3:25 pm

    Yes, good suggestion it could be the title as well. Dragooned is chosen because of its appropriate double meaning of "coerced/forced" and "a mounted infantryman armed with a carbine." His struggle, "Sturm und Drang", is evident. He is a Pole who has to fight along with his German oppressor. His goalRead more

    Yes, good suggestion it could be the title as well. Dragooned is chosen because of its appropriate double meaning of “coerced/forced” and “a mounted infantryman armed with a carbine.” His struggle, “Sturm und Drang”, is evident. He is a Pole who has to fight along with his German oppressor. His goal is stated in “to survive hell.”

    Thank you Kerry for your comment. More on the script can be found here:

    http://false-flags0.webnode.com/

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