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  1. Posted: October 23, 2013In: Examples

    A young reporter investigates a case involving a mysterious videotape which causes the death of anyone who watches it.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 12:51 pm

    Young in the sense of a novice reporter? Don't give away the videotape causes death. Let him investigate "a series of deadly cases"

    Young in the sense of a novice reporter? Don’t give away the videotape causes death. Let him investigate “a series of deadly cases”

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  2. Posted: November 5, 2013In: Public

    A middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 12:40 pm

    A Canadian ? Maybe you could fill that one in for more clarity. For me, being totally blank on the rap scene, your logline is confusing in the sense of the second line -contesting his alimony payments in LA-. If I leave that part out the logline is suddenly clear and more strong. Titel suggestion? IRead more

    A Canadian ? Maybe you could fill that one in for more clarity. For me, being totally blank on the rap scene, your logline is confusing in the sense of the second line -contesting his alimony payments in LA-. If I leave that part out the logline is suddenly clear and more strong.

    Titel suggestion? In a short Google on bi-coastal rap wars I came across the titel of the song “Who shot ya?

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  3. Posted: November 3, 2013In: Public

    When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.

    Fred Wohlert Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 6, 2013 at 12:17 pm

    Literally storm and stress. Disquiet, ferment, fermentation, restiveness, restlessness, unrest, turmoil, uneasiness, unquietness. I found Sturm und Drang the ideal definition. It has a German origin in the English language and expresses the constant battle of feelings and changes the protagonist isRead more

    Literally storm and stress. Disquiet, ferment, fermentation, restiveness, restlessness, unrest, turmoil, uneasiness, unquietness.

    I found Sturm und Drang the ideal definition. It has a German origin in the English language and expresses the constant battle of feelings and changes the protagonist is undergoing.

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