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When a TV program is set to launch an expose on a commune, a member who sought refuge in the group because his grandfather’s murder was instigated by the media, devices a plan to sabotage the TV network and protect his identity.
Roberto, I strongly suggest that you un-complicate this logline by starting over and focusing on what your story could really be about. Think of a logline as an elevator pitch that was taken apart by a scalpel.
Roberto,
I strongly suggest that you un-complicate this logline by starting over and focusing on what your story could really be about. Think of a logline as an elevator pitch that was taken apart by a scalpel.
See lessWhen an emo-themed magazine is accused of causing a rash of suicides among young girls, a new editor is hired to change its editorial direction. Before starting, the new editor decides to dig deeper into the past editor?s affairs and discovers that an inmate, who believes she was wrongly accused of murder by the neighbor?s babysitter, was controlling the magazine from prison.
Roberto, This plot is all over the place. For the logline purposes, you need to break things down to their raw essence. A magazine editor is hired to repair the image of a troubled publication until realizing... Now what is the goal and stakes? You don't have much space to get this done. 1-2 lines.Read more
Roberto,
This plot is all over the place. For the logline purposes, you need to break things down to their raw essence.
A magazine editor is hired to repair the image of a troubled publication until realizing…
Now what is the goal and stakes? You don’t have much space to get this done. 1-2 lines. 1 is better.
See lessWhen a widow realizes that the ongoing completion of her late husband?s life?s work — an adventure park — is depleting her entire inheritance, she decides to integrate a working village in the park to generate income and inadvertently attracts a cult.
Good, but what must her goal be in regards to the cult? Danger? What's the risk there to overcome? That's the real story, IMO.
Good, but what must her goal be in regards to the cult? Danger? What’s the risk there to overcome? That’s the real story, IMO.
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