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When a portal to hell mysteriously opens, an inexperienced mage born of the hellish dimension, is the only one who can close it and bring peace to the kingdom.
Dk makes a point that this has sound elements, however, it reads poorly. I would remove that 2nd comma and speed up the read or rework it a bit altogether. After a hell portal opens, a young mage is tasked with finding a way to close it before a great kingdom is completely destroyed.
Dk makes a point that this has sound elements, however, it reads poorly. I would remove that 2nd comma and speed up the read or rework it a bit altogether.
After a hell portal opens, a young mage is tasked with finding a way to close it before a great kingdom is completely destroyed.
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I liked the first version better.
I liked the first version better.
See lessAn immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.
Nikki, This sounds good structurally, especially since it's a comedy. Is it a feature or series?
Nikki,
This sounds good structurally, especially since it’s a comedy. Is it a feature or series?
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