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  1. Posted: August 16, 2017In: Drama

    When a high school dance instructor is accused of molesting the principal?s son, a public dance carefully choreographed to expose the real perpetrator ? to everyone?s surprise, the school?s biggest donor ? inspires school officials to rename the school?s auditorium honoring the accused.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 16, 2017 at 1:03 pm

    Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck

    Robert,

    Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.

    I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.

    Good luck

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2017In: Coming of Age

    When a commune agrees to full coverage in a TV program, the group’s newest member, on the lam from media attacks that led to a family murder, devices a plan to sabotage the TV’s plan to protect his identity.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 16, 2017 at 1:02 pm

    Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck.

    Robert,

    Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.

    I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.

    Good luck.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2017In: Comedy

    Terrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.

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    Added an answer on August 4, 2017 at 5:36 am

    Boy, I feel bad for his potential date. Here she's thinking she's scoring a great guy, but he's really a liar and user. Gonna be hard to root for that guy. Great advice so far. ?I can see this having some great potential for funny moments since it is a comedy. Ask yourself what the morale of this stRead more

    Boy, I feel bad for his potential date. Here she’s thinking she’s scoring a great guy, but he’s really a liar and user. Gonna be hard to root for that guy.

    Great advice so far. ?I can see this having some great potential for funny moments since it is a comedy.

    Ask yourself what the morale of this story really is and what you want to convey, and be sure you reflect that when the curtain drops. I would want him to really stand up for his sexual feelings/choices and come out the better person for it.

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