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  1. Posted: July 15, 2017In: Thriller

    That psychedelic drug would be developed by the person who cooked it getting to the highest purity range In the planet,in/on each individual will be processed differently and this is what alarms the person because it’d mean the reality on this world that the consumer is expiriencing COULD change.An entity would change it,anentity that uses the connection that occurs when the receptors in the brain receive the substance molecule(which can be related to all psychedelic drugs known to mankind including “the god’s molecule”) as it’s path to communicate with the person(man or woman). thriller/enhancer/ introspective/suspense (don’t think about stealing it or filtering it…this entity will know…I AM THE OWNER).

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 18, 2017 at 12:31 am

    Yunsa, Comparing what you wrote to just about all of the other examples on this page should at least set off an alarm that you're doing something really wrong as it pertains to loglines. Most just miss the story beats, you missed the entire drum.

    Yunsa,

    Comparing what you wrote to just about all of the other examples on this page should at least set off an alarm that you’re doing something really wrong as it pertains to loglines. Most just miss the story beats, you missed the entire drum.

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2017In: Drama

    A TV sports celeb with a gambling habit suffers memory loss after being mugged, resulting in him forgetting to pay the people he owes.

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2017 at 8:25 pm

    Joe, You have an interesting setup here, just missing a bit. Now, one can assume where this story is going, but better to adjust this. After suffering a head injury, a sports anchor must recall and settle his degenerative gambling debts before ______ happens.

    Joe,

    You have an interesting setup here, just missing a bit. Now, one can assume where this story is going, but better to adjust this.

    After suffering a head injury, a sports anchor must recall and settle his degenerative gambling debts before ______ happens.

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  3. Posted: July 11, 2017In: Romance

    When a girl falls in love with an alien, she must fight to stop the government and developers from destroying the lake that keeps him alive. This is a mixed genre – Thriller/Sci-Fi/Romance.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2017 at 6:51 am

    Yes, please stay with a single thread so that we can follow the progress made on the logline. Thx.

    Yes, please stay with a single thread so that we can follow the progress made on the logline. Thx.

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