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  1. Posted: April 25, 2017In: Drama

    When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 26, 2017 at 12:25 am

    An party girl must raise a young child while convincing the mob to break her father break out of prison.

    An party girl must raise a young child while convincing the mob to break her father break out of prison.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2017In: Drama

    When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 26, 2017 at 12:18 am

    Good review, DK. Just to add, I think that people (myself included) feel that we must over inform about the story. An interesting party, in most of our cases -- a producer with the power to purchase, reads our loglines to see if we are even in the genre they are looking for... and they are all veryRead more

    Good review, DK. Just to add, I think that people (myself included) feel that we must over inform about the story. An interesting party, in most of our cases — a producer with the power to purchase, reads our loglines to see if we are even in the genre they are looking for… and they are all very busy people with hundreds of stories to consider.

    So why then do we try to make our story appeal to everyone even if it does not? In reality, we don’t want our say horror script in the hands of Spielberg — he doesn’t make those. It’s a waste of time.

    My limited experience hooking has so far led me to believe that our premise had better be razor sharp at communicating our story. If it isn’t, interesting parties won’t even click on it to get to the next part — elevator hook/synopsis/actual script. And that’s what we want them to do.

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  3. Posted: April 23, 2017In: Examples

    When a spaceship transporting colonists on a 90 year journey to a distant planet malfunctions causing a passenger to awaken from hibernation early, he must find a way to resume hibernation or die of old age.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 24, 2017 at 11:38 am

    Haven't seen it yet. Sounds overly small.

    Haven’t seen it yet. Sounds overly small.

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