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  1. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Drama

    A simple ordinary man loses all hope from life after being falsely accused of domestic violence by his dominant wife. He is also on the verge of losing custody of his girl child, the only love of his life. He turns to his schoolfriend who has always been rebellious and cool, and who is a motivational writer and a mini celebrity by now, for advice. In the process, he learns about his friend?s own dark secrets which makes him the indifferent, sex-addicted man that he is today. Men have issues too. Will you care to ask ? For once?

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 24, 2017 at 12:57 am

    At this length and at this structure, this is more like a quick pitch or elevator pitch.

    At this length and at this structure, this is more like a quick pitch or elevator pitch.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2017In: Drama

    One last attempt. Share your thoughts: A bankrupt man ventures into dangerous territory to meet with an old friend who promised him money to pay for his son?s emergency operation.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 24, 2017 at 12:43 am

    Also, shouldn't these threads be chained instead of restarted so that we can easily follow the progress? A bankrupt man must find an old acquaintance in a dangerous part of (name of territory) in order to secure funds and pay for his son's high-risk surgery.

    Also, shouldn’t these threads be chained instead of restarted so that we can easily follow the progress?

    A bankrupt man must find an old acquaintance in a dangerous part of (name of territory) in order to secure funds and pay for his son’s high-risk surgery.

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  3. Posted: March 22, 2017In: Comedy

    A quirky musician tries everything to finally make the first move to his best friend. And it?s not what you think.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 2:52 am

    As dpg says, and also try writing 3-4 main points about your story -- the absolute most important issues about why you want to tell this story and why we want to experience it -- and then that will give us some more to work with.

    As dpg says, and also try writing 3-4 main points about your story — the absolute most important issues about why you want to tell this story and why we want to experience it — and then that will give us some more to work with.

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