1. Posted: February 2, 2018In:

    In a futuristic crime-free world rendered paralyzed by digital addiction, an alcoholic policeman, repurposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum social media popularity, must unravel the mystery behind his daughter?s kidnapping

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    "Minimal social media popularity" - I'd be the first to die in this future. Otherwise, the log gets the gist across. Just not much different going on here.

    “Minimal social media popularity” – I’d be the first to die in this future.

    Otherwise, the log gets the gist across. Just not much different going on here.

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  2. Posted: February 2, 2018In:

    After many miscarriages a desperate Querulous woman seeks a surrogate from a very unlikely person in order to fulfill her dreams of being a mother.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    I got nothing. You sure that you can convince an audience to get behind a bitchy woman who can't have a kid? I mean, why is she having so many miscarriages and what about the poor chap's feelings in all of this? By very unlikely, what does that mean exactly?

    I got nothing.

    You sure that you can convince an audience to get behind a bitchy woman who can’t have a kid? I mean, why is she having so many miscarriages and what about the poor chap’s feelings in all of this? By very unlikely, what does that mean exactly?

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  3. Posted: January 31, 2018In:

    A hardworking but unsuccessful father?s innocent lie, that he is a superhero, puts his kids in trouble who are held as hostages with terrorist and security forces gives up on them; now he must fight terrorists without breaking his kid?s myth that he is a superhero or otherwise the truth will devastate the kids and he might loose his last support in his life, his family.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    A fake superhero risks exposing his lies to the world in order to rescue his kidnapped children from terrorists.

    A fake superhero risks exposing his lies to the world in order to rescue his kidnapped children from terrorists.

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