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Inspite of being a professional and personal failure, Sangha is optimist in life but one thing he can?t afford to risk is his innocent lie he told his son that he is a superhero.
I don't know where to begin. Recommend checking out the formula on this site and reading some real loglines. You need to examine your story and then start over, unfortunately.
I don’t know where to begin. Recommend checking out the formula on this site and reading some real loglines.
You need to examine your story and then start over, unfortunately.
See lessWhen his hive is attacked by landscapers, a nerdy ant must work with an arrogant wasp, a sly cockroach and a vicious spider to create a 6ft tall mech to take on the human mecace and prove himself to the Ant Queen.
"nerdy ant" Got a better way to describe the M.C. as an underdog? The 3 sidekicks sound more interesting than the ant. Try to include the stakes for which failure before something happens would be. Got a title for this? Just curious.
“nerdy ant” Got a better way to describe the M.C. as an underdog?
The 3 sidekicks sound more interesting than the ant.
Try to include the stakes for which failure before something happens would be.
Got a title for this? Just curious.
See lessAn Orthodox Ivy Leaguer with dreams of marrying his high school sweetheart descends into depression following his best friend’s murder and tries to preserve his relationship, and sanity, while fighting personal demons and hostile classmates.
Sam, I'm getting a good picture of what this is about. Perhaps change "descends" into "fights?" Take one of the "and" out and replace it with a comma. Great start so far.
Sam, I’m getting a good picture of what this is about. Perhaps change “descends” into “fights?” Take one of the “and” out and replace it with a comma.
Great start so far.
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