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“Claudia V?zquez is the most prestigious and reputed parapsychologist in Spain today, who from her early years until her maturity will not stop from facing the paranormal, until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation.”
A reputed psychologist becomes relentless in her pursuit of the paranormal resulting in a final confrontation with the powers of the unknown.I'm sure everyone here will agree that you should not mention the character's name unless she is a previously known figure or a real-life person.
A reputed psychologist becomes relentless in her pursuit of the paranormal resulting in a final confrontation with the powers of the unknown.
I’m sure everyone here will agree that you should not mention the character’s name unless she is a previously known figure or a real-life person.
See lessAfter he spoils a shipment of drugs, newly-wed Jim must pay back the value in full after the drug’s owners kidnap his brother-in-law.
Agreed, Your choice of words are interesting. Not uncommon to see writers toss in vague adjectives and strange writing styles. Newly wed. Brother in law. Pay back the value. Spoils a shipment of drugs. 26 words as is. Not super long, but if you scalple this, just think how much better it could readRead more
Agreed,
Your choice of words are interesting. Not uncommon to see writers toss in vague adjectives and strange writing styles.
Newly wed. Brother in law. Pay back the value. Spoils a shipment of drugs.
26 words as is. Not super long, but if you scalple this, just think how much better it could read or at least, you would have room to add more formula elements, such as a ticking time bomb, etc…
See lessWhen an assassin whose memories are erased after every hit falls in love with his latest target, he must find who wants her dead to get the contract cancelled, but doing so will trigger his next memory reboot.
Golly, I just hate the use of comma training a logline. Almost seems lazy to me.
Golly, I just hate the use of comma training a logline. Almost seems lazy to me.
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