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  1. Posted: December 21, 2017In: Action

    A paraplegic marine accepts robotic limbs in order to take down the Artificial Intelligence company responsible for murdering his family.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 22, 2017 at 8:03 am

    I would try to connect the handicap with the antagonist as well. This, plus the family murders will make things real personal.

    I would try to connect the handicap with the antagonist as well. This, plus the family murders will make things real personal.

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  2. Posted: December 18, 2017In: Adventure

    A young princess sheltering in a strange desert, after her father is slain and throne taken by a rival kingdom, discovers her exiled genie mother who mentors her quest to exact revenge and vanquish the usurper, dooming her as Arabia?s first maiden ruler.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 18, 2017 at 1:10 am

    Recluse, You are trying to pack way too much into 1 sentence. Try stripping the adjectives and then bring this down to it's story essence.

    Recluse,

    You are trying to pack way too much into 1 sentence. Try stripping the adjectives and then bring this down to it’s story essence.

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  3. Posted: December 13, 2017In: Examples

    When a reserved accountant is condemned, he needs fight the corrupt prison system to prove his innocene or serve a life sentence.

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    Added an answer on December 17, 2017 at 2:22 am

    Moviefreak, I noticed you begin your loglines with "When a..."? I recommend you mix it up and try different things. Variety is king.

    Moviefreak,

    I noticed you begin your loglines with “When a…”? I recommend you mix it up and try different things. Variety is king.

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