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A man is held by unseen captives that thwart his every escape attempt. He discovers that they are his other personalities that have trying to stop his most violent personality escaping and killing again.
You are giving away wayyyyy too much in the log. Where is he held captive? What specific keeps him challenged to escape? A desperate man struggles to identify his captors and formulate an escape before he goes mad.
You are giving away wayyyyy too much in the log.
Where is he held captive? What specific keeps him challenged to escape?
A desperate man struggles to identify his captors and formulate an escape before he goes mad.
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An out of work husband needs to raise 24 Lakhs in one day to pay for his wife's medical procedure. You can shorten this a tiny bit. In essence, you have most elements covered in a compact logline. That's good. Without knowing the monetary conversion, this doesn't seem such a daunting task. Perhaps cRead more
An out of work husband needs to raise 24 Lakhs in one day to pay for his wife’s medical procedure.
You can shorten this a tiny bit. In essence, you have most elements covered in a compact logline. That’s good.
Without knowing the monetary conversion, this doesn’t seem such a daunting task. Perhaps change it?
What nature of task does the husband have to do? Illegal? Dangerous? May want to hit upon that. It says drama, so I assume it’s not a physical expenditure.
Otherwise, pretty good job. Most loglines on the site aren’t as polished! Kudos. 🙂
See lessAfter being framed for the murder of two policemen, Peter, an inocent man with a criminal past, must fight to get his daughter back while running away from the revenge-driven police force and the angered population of the town that has been conditioned by the media to see him as a monster.
After being framed for a murder, an ex-con must evade the police, an angry posse and then prove his innocence or else his daughter... (what about her?) Cut this down to the essence. The problem I see is that he can't "get his daughter" anywhere safe if he is still on the run. Who has her, if anyone?Read more
After being framed for a murder, an ex-con must evade the police, an angry posse and then prove his innocence or else his daughter… (what about her?)
Cut this down to the essence. The problem I see is that he can’t “get his daughter” anywhere safe if he is still on the run. Who has her, if anyone?
What’s the ticking time bomb and what’s the stake/goal as it relates to his daughter?
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