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  1. Posted: November 17, 2017In: Drama

    A kind-hearted, school teacher is ready to move into his first home but finds one problem–a woman in a blood-stained nightgown–hiding in the closet.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 17, 2017 at 3:23 am

    letcon, What must the Main Character accomplish in order to beat this woman and survive for another day?

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    What must the Main Character accomplish in order to beat this woman and survive for another day?

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  2. Posted: November 15, 2017In: Examples

    When evidence surfaces that an earlier generation of rebellious replicants has reproduced, a compliant next generation blade runner must find and ‘retire’ the child whose existence threatens human domination.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 15, 2017 at 11:25 pm

    The logline works when you have prior knowledge of the world. Otherwise, which human domination and how? As a fresh story intro, it's kinda confusing as to what the protag is or must do.

    The logline works when you have prior knowledge of the world. Otherwise, which human domination and how?

    As a fresh story intro, it’s kinda confusing as to what the protag is or must do.

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  3. Posted: November 13, 2017In: Thriller

    A woman stands up one man for another because he is nicer, so she thought. She soon discovers he’s a serial killer and her life depends on the first man to send that psycho to hell.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 10:40 pm

    Agreed with Richiev, and to add, what does the stood man want to achieve in this story? Write the log from his point of view

    Agreed with Richiev, and to add, what does the stood man want to achieve in this story? Write the log from his point of view

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