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  1. Posted: November 7, 2017In: War

    A British Major and aristocrat must team up with a vulgar guerilla leader in order to blow up a bridge in Nazi occupied Greece. Based on a true story.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 8, 2017 at 2:56 am

    This Force 10 from Navarone?

    This Force 10 from Navarone?

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  2. Posted: November 4, 2017In: Drama

    A womanizer music mogul, finds himself wrapped up in a sexual abuse scandal after finding true love with a beautiful singer who shapes him into a better man.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 5, 2017 at 12:30 am

    You may as well place: THE END at the end of your logline. You gave away the whole story. Change a few words so that someone has a goal that will be fullfilled before the end of the movie. It must be the protagonist too. Is it the man or the woman, not sure from reading it.The reason why we want toRead more

    You may as well place: THE END at the end of your logline. You gave away the whole story. Change a few words so that someone has a goal that will be fullfilled before the end of the movie. It must be the protagonist too. Is it the man or the woman, not sure from reading it.The reason why we want to see act 3 and how the story will be resolved.

    This reminds me of Pretty Woman a little.

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  3. Posted: November 3, 2017In: Comedy

    In order to impress his friends at a backyard campout, a young boy and his father struggle to avoid corny horror tropes as they narrate and develop the scariest camp fire story of all time.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 4, 2017 at 1:44 am

    But then their campout becomes a real horror scene when kids die horribly and then the father dies in front of his son, and then the son needs to run away and just barely makes it out alive after outwitting the killer by telling knock-knock jokes, only to succumb to cancer when he turns 50, right? SRead more

    But then their campout becomes a real horror scene when kids die horribly and then the father dies in front of his son, and then the son needs to run away and just barely makes it out alive after outwitting the killer by telling knock-knock jokes, only to succumb to cancer when he turns 50, right?

    Seriously, though, inventing a story can’t be the only thing you want to show the audience? You need a structure to the story and events that must be overcome otherwise, what’s the point?

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