1. Posted: October 11, 2017In:

    Young, desperate criminal Anthony Secorro and his small gang deal with the horrific consequenses of committing a strong-armed robbery during an exorcism.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Cloptic, What does the robbery have to do with the exorcism that makes the ultimate goal of your story fresh and unique? Anything else you can add about the plot that could help with the logline?

    Cloptic,

    What does the robbery have to do with the exorcism that makes the ultimate goal of your story fresh and unique?

    Anything else you can add about the plot that could help with the logline?

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  2. Posted: October 10, 2017In:

    A gifted young aid worker tormented by his dreams is thrust into a world where he learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. He must learn to master his gift to save humanity and the people he loves.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Happy, I strongly suggest you touch on what this gift is and how it will be paramount to saving humanity.

    Happy,

    I strongly suggest you touch on what this gift is and how it will be paramount to saving humanity.

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2017In:

    During a medieval LARP Event in a remote forest, a group of friends is looking for rescue as something within the woods is haunting and capturing the peoples minds and lets them feel the urge to commit suicide.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Karuzo, What is a LARP event from medieval times exactly? Without knowing that, I don't get how it relates to suicidal suggestions.

    Karuzo,

    What is a LARP event from medieval times exactly? Without knowing that, I don’t get how it relates to suicidal suggestions.

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