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(Set in the late 19th century) To prevent the bank foreclosing on her family estate, a brilliant teenage biologist must travel to Australia to track down her missing parents, but discovers a world full of strange monsters and must create one of her own to survive.
As a side thought, if you changed "must create" a monster, to she "must become" a monster, imagine how much more of a character arc your story has just from that tiny change.
As a side thought, if you changed “must create” a monster, to she “must become” a monster, imagine how much more of a character arc your story has just from that tiny change.
See less(Set in the late 19th century) To prevent the bank foreclosing on her family estate, a brilliant teenage biologist must travel to Australia to track down her missing parents, but discovers a world full of strange monsters and must create one of her own to survive.
Recommend that you don't say "brilliant". Focus on her desperation and situation urgency instead. Show her being brilliant/overcoming stuff. When I read this, I feel she will 100% succeed already. If she discovers a world full of magical creatures then why must she create one of her own when she canRead more
Recommend that you don’t say “brilliant”. Focus on her desperation and situation urgency instead. Show her being brilliant/overcoming stuff. When I read this, I feel she will 100% succeed already. If she discovers a world full of magical creatures then why must she create one of her own when she can just take/train one?
As far as her parents go, she only tracks them down for financial reasons and not for love of family?
See lessA hard-headed teenager who dreams up the perfect movie idea must overcome his laziness and learn the logline formula to create a marketable script before he gets pimp-slapped by the impatient veterans of logline.it for posting without following the instructions on the left. (Block Comedy)
Based on a true story.
Based on a true story.
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