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  1. Posted: October 17, 2017In: SciFi

    Humans and Fae must overcome hatred and fear to survive the collision of their worlds.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 17, 2017 at 6:46 am

    Agree with the great advice from DKpough1. You have an idea for a story, but need the outline of what will drive the story.

    Agree with the great advice from DKpough1. You have an idea for a story, but need the outline of what will drive the story.

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2017In: Drama

    When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 16, 2017 at 9:57 pm

    Pazz, Avoid mentioning your protagonist by name unless he/she is a historical figure. You need to briefly describe instead. After a mental breakdown, a _____? abandons his fortune in order to return home to the land of his spiritual roots.

    Pazz,

    Avoid mentioning your protagonist by name unless he/she is a historical figure. You need to briefly describe instead.

    After a mental breakdown, a _____? abandons his fortune in order to return home to the land of his spiritual roots.

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  3. Posted: October 16, 2017In: Action

    Denied life insurance benefits after her partner dies, an unemployed chef must unravel a diabolical link between the insurance company, a genetic testing company, and a popular internet search engine before she and her unborn child become their next victims.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 16, 2017 at 12:45 pm

    Solace, you are touching on a lot of story points here and some of them don't connect too well. How does a chef fit into this more than any other occupation one can think of? The partner dying doesn't seem to have much relation to the story. What about either of them suggests their value in this nefRead more

    Solace, you are touching on a lot of story points here and some of them don’t connect too well.

    How does a chef fit into this more than any other occupation one can think of?

    The partner dying doesn’t seem to have much relation to the story. What about either of them suggests their value in this nefarious battle to risk exposure?

    Why would a search engine want to kill her and her unborn child?

    What does she need to navigate for the action elements in this action story?

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