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JC a 10-year-old boy genius in Outback Australia overcomes life’s endless hardships and grows into a man solving his community’s problems using his great intellect. In the process, he becomes the towns, Wet and Dry Goods Merchant, Pharmacist, Dentist, Optometrist, Mayor, Honorary Anesthesiologist, and romances his Childhood sweetheart along the way.
Holiday, Not sure where to even start with this. Sounds like Doogie Houser on steroids. Definitely read more about loglines and story building. What you wrote is more like a summary and even then what theme/message does your story convey? You need to think of one for this wonder boy.
Holiday,
Not sure where to even start with this. Sounds like Doogie Houser on steroids.
Definitely read more about loglines and story building. What you wrote is more like a summary and even then what theme/message does your story convey? You need to think of one for this wonder boy.
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Shiva, You have 5 threads for this story. It's more productive to keep it as one. This version is way too long and convoluted. I fear you're trying to make this story more meaty than it really is. The last version said it better.
Shiva,
You have 5 threads for this story. It’s more productive to keep it as one.
This version is way too long and convoluted. I fear you’re trying to make this story more meaty than it really is.
The last version said it better.
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It has clarity and interesting plot points. I'd try to smoothen it out a bit and maybe shorten it as well. I don't care for the "however" transition within the logline.
It has clarity and interesting plot points. I’d try to smoothen it out a bit and maybe shorten it as well.
I don’t care for the “however” transition within the logline.
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