1. Posted: October 23, 2017In:

    Rose evolves to have healing powers against her capability to kill using a psychological weapon, unites with the military of USA and ends terrorism, to found a better world where death doesn?t exist, for one big family called World including her clone children.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Rhea, This is crazy all over the place. You need to cut and strip this down to the bare story essence. This story about the person Rose finding her new powers? Or do we pick up later as she develops healing? Not sure how the clones fit into the story at all. Trained to kill using only her mind. SheRead more

    Rhea,

    This is crazy all over the place. You need to cut and strip this down to the bare story essence.

    This story about the person Rose finding her new powers? Or do we pick up later as she develops healing? Not sure how the clones fit into the story at all.

    Trained to kill using only her mind.

    She develops healing powers.

    To fight terrorism.

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  2. Posted: October 23, 2017In:

    After a decade of hunting terrorists. Liam?s new icy adventure to restore an abandoned ski lodge ends up with his former Special forces team having to adapt to being the hunted when they cross paths with a legendary creature known for its winter scream.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    You can add the ticking time bomb that they must kill the creature before the vacationers arrive.

    You can add the ticking time bomb that they must kill the creature before the vacationers arrive.

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  3. Posted: October 23, 2017In:

    A hopeless romantic is stuck in a love triangle with her fiance and his bestman, and has three months to choose who she walks down the isle with.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Agree with Paul. He hit on everything I thought about after? reading this log version.

    Agree with Paul. He hit on everything I thought about after? reading this log version.

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