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  1. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Adventure

    Novel: When his critically ill mother tells him to stop drifting through life, a penpusher leaves his entire life behind to go on an adventure and pursue his dream of finding a legendary animal in the heart of south america.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 24, 2017 at 4:25 am

    Jumeriot, How does the death of a mother want to make a guy want to chase after a cat? Even further, how does one honor the memory of a wild cat? Focus on the adventure and why the MC needs to partake in it. A pencil pusher may not make the best adventurer.

    Jumeriot,

    How does the death of a mother want to make a guy want to chase after a cat? Even further, how does one honor the memory of a wild cat?

    Focus on the adventure and why the MC needs to partake in it. A pencil pusher may not make the best adventurer.

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  2. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Examples

    When androids of a wild west theme park start gaining conscience, the scientist behind the show must overcome the senior manager’s intention to shut down the current program.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 24, 2017 at 3:38 am

    Movie was great with the late Mr. Brenner as the OG Terminator before there was Arnie. The tv show, not so much. As much as we want the super android to be the focal point of the story, it serves better when ordinary humans are the focal point. We relate to them. It works. One of my all-time favoritRead more

    Movie was great with the late Mr. Brenner as the OG Terminator before there was Arnie.

    The tv show, not so much.

    As much as we want the super android to be the focal point of the story, it serves better when ordinary humans are the focal point. We relate to them. It works.

    One of my all-time favorite movie.

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  3. Posted: October 23, 2017In: Family

    When he arrives for a year in america, a reserved french student must learn to adapt to make the most out of the experience.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 23, 2017 at 9:45 pm

    Adapt to what? What's he reserved about? America bends over backwards for the people of the world compared to a giant list of other countries around the world that you could have set this in. What's his challenge while in America, specifically? Why is he reserved and about what? Sounds like he can sRead more

    Adapt to what? What’s he reserved about? America bends over backwards for the people of the world compared to a giant list of other countries around the world that you could have set this in.

    What’s his challenge while in America, specifically? Why is he reserved and about what?

    Sounds like he can simply go back to France and solve his reservation.

    Need more info about his plight.

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