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A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.
Aschwin hit it right on the head with his comments. Also, Your indirectly-implied-goal is way larger than it needs to be. Keep it a bit simpler. What entity or person is trying to stop her and why? Cloning was a screenplay fad decades ago and unless you are introducing something really new, I can'tRead more
Aschwin hit it right on the head with his comments. Also,
Your indirectly-implied-goal is way larger than it needs to be. Keep it a bit simpler. What entity or person is trying to stop her and why? Cloning was a screenplay fad decades ago and unless you are introducing something really new, I can’t imagine where the hook comes from that a non-cloned family would easily deliver instead.
I’m certain a mass-killer won’t make the world a better place.
Let me try a version:
A biologically enhanced mother uses her abilities to challenge the global government into allowing cloning as a legal means to re-populate the world.
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The updated thing is -- you don't have to run to Hollywood anymore to be an actor or filmmaker. Matter of fact, Hollywood is running away from Hollywood these days. And for good reason, too! Your story's premise may be outdated.
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Your story’s premise may be outdated.
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