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  1. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Adventure

    Novel: When his critically ill mother tells him to stop drifting through life, a penpusher leaves his entire life behind to go on an adventure and pursue his dream of finding a legendary animal in the heart of south america.

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    Added an answer on October 25, 2017 at 4:43 pm

    I don't care for "drifting through life." When his mother falls critically ill, a secluded son undertakes her life-long quest to find a legendary animal located in the heart of South America before she dies.

    I don’t care for “drifting through life.”

    When his mother falls critically ill, a secluded son undertakes her life-long quest to find a legendary animal located in the heart of South America before she dies.

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2017In: Horror

    While restoring an abandoned ski-lodge, a group of adrenaline-junkie ex-soldiers take sides in a secret war between a legendary creature and mysterious trappers determined to hunt it into extinction. Action/Horror

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 25, 2017 at 4:32 pm

    I like the premise and also the progress your making with the logline. Don't mention that they are soldiers. Close friends works. Retired friends works. Why take sides? Discover it or are forced to take sides. They have more investment if you say they own the ski lodge. After investing in a ski-lodgRead more

    I like the premise and also the progress your making with the logline. Don’t mention that they are soldiers. Close friends works. Retired friends works.

    Why take sides? Discover it or are forced to take sides. They have more investment if you say they own the ski lodge.

    After investing in a ski-lodge, a group of friends are forced to take sides in a war between the locals and a mysterious creature before it’s hunted into extinction.

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  3. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Fantasy

    Novel: In a supernatural world where superpowers are common, a likeable teenager discovers he possesses a power known to be cursed. Cast out by society, he will go on a journey to learn the origin of his power and prove to himself and the society he can be better than the curse.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 25, 2017 at 4:00 am

    Say that he's fighting the curse. Short and sweet.

    Say that he’s fighting the curse. Short and sweet.

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