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?An unlikely duo of a wacky magician and a former Shaolin nun must stop the released demon to save the kingdom and their lives from the demon?s revenge.?
"When a captured demon finally finds a way to get rid of,"? -- What does this mean up until the comma? Is this about the fight between 2 demons, one captured in a kingdom and another looking to attack? Therefore, what does the magician and ex-nun exactly have to do to turn the tide of the fight? I'mRead more
“When a captured demon finally finds a way to get rid of,”? — What does this mean up until the comma? Is this about the fight between 2 demons, one captured in a kingdom and another looking to attack?
Therefore, what does the magician and ex-nun exactly have to do to turn the tide of the fight?
I’m confused.
See lessA mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.
Rhea, What you fail to recognize is that you will not have the luxury of explaining your plot with giant paragraphs of details. That's why we have the logline formula to attract a person to instantly absorb the story plot and then lure them into wanting to watch/make the movie. And if someone doesn'Read more
Rhea,
What you fail to recognize is that you will not have the luxury of explaining your plot with giant paragraphs of details. That’s why we have the logline formula to attract a person to instantly absorb the story plot and then lure them into wanting to watch/make the movie. And if someone doesn’t want to watch the movie, why in the hell would anyone want to make the movie?
You are describing mostly the novel aspects of a story. That’s good for fleshing out your characters and story boarding. With film, you need to focus it down to laser or cherrypick from the 3 act structure.
As dpg mentions, who or what will stand in this super person’s way? You tease the audience and set things up right until that final showdown and then stop, forcing them to want more.
See lessWhile restoring an abandoned ski-lodge, a group of adrenaline-junkie ex-soldiers take sides in a secret war between a legendary creature and mysterious trappers determined to hunt it into extinction. Action/Horror
After investing in an OLD ski-lodge, a group of friends are forced to take sides in a war between the locals and a?LEGENDARY creature before it?s hunted into extinction. Add these 2 changes and it goes a long way t what your trying to emphasize.
After investing in an OLD ski-lodge, a group of friends are forced to take sides in a war between the locals and a?LEGENDARY creature before it?s hunted into extinction.
Add these 2 changes and it goes a long way t what your trying to emphasize.
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