1. Posted: October 27, 2017In:

    A soldier returns from war to bury his parents and tend to his sister who remains in a coma. He soon discovers her constant sexual abuse and seeks revenge on her behalf. ~this is a revenge film in the vein of Taken meets Identity~

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Seeks revenge on whom? Taken was more of a rescue film, not really a revenge film. "His comatose sister." sounds shorter and better.

    Seeks revenge on whom?

    Taken was more of a rescue film, not really a revenge film.

    “His comatose sister.” sounds shorter and better.

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  2. Posted: October 26, 2017In:

    An Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Agree with Fandango, This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?

    Agree with Fandango,

    This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2017In:

    ?An unlikely duo of a wacky magician and a former Shaolin nun must stop the released demon to save the kingdom and their lives from the demon?s revenge.?

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Now it sounds like a comedy/action.

    Now it sounds like a comedy/action.

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