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  1. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Comedy

    When a criminal investigation threatens her wealthy estate, a selfish woman places it in a charitable foundation run by her na?ve, unhinged colleague and attempts to maintain control without her knowledge. (Sitcom)

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 1, 2017 at 12:52 am

    I also assume that the authorities are working to become wise to her and pursue them both? One thing about Government, they are good at following?the trail of money.

    I also assume that the authorities are working to become wise to her and pursue them both? One thing about Government, they are good at following?the trail of money.

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  2. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Comedy

    When a criminal investigation threatens her wealthy estate, a selfish woman places it in a charitable foundation run by her na?ve, unhinged colleague and attempts to maintain control without her knowledge. (Sitcom)

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 4:37 pm

    Paul, Confused about this. She places the entire estate, not just cash into a charitable foundation? If she is the protagonist and also a criminal, why would we want to root for her to maintain control? Is the charity friend the Protagonist? If so, you need to rewrite this to reflect that. OtherwiseRead more

    Paul,

    Confused about this. She places the entire estate, not just cash into a charitable foundation? If she is the protagonist and also a criminal, why would we want to root for her to maintain control?

    Is the charity friend the Protagonist? If so, you need to rewrite this to reflect that.

    Otherwise, sounds like a fresh story with potential.

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  3. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Thriller

    An established private investigator that unintentionally causes an international disaster by crashing a drone into a flying airliner must decide between turning himself in or covering his tracks and attempting to start a new life.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 11:47 am

    As a drone flyer, I'm curious as to what choice he makes. Mind divulging? Lol But yes, where is the identifying conflict for the audience coming from here?

    As a drone flyer, I’m curious as to what choice he makes. Mind divulging? Lol

    But yes, where is the identifying conflict for the audience coming from here?

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