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Change "keeping her alive" to "protect" or something similar. Mentally troubled doesn'twork so well either. How about emotional?
Change “keeping her alive” to “protect” or something similar. Mentally troubled doesn’twork so well either. How about emotional?
See lessAn inspiring chronicle of a novice biker girl’s 3,000- mile long solo heroic Motorbike quest to win her inspirational nomad soul mate.
Sounds interesting. You got some good things working here. Is this based on a true story? Not sure how the nomad soul mate plays into the story. Where does this take place?
Sounds interesting. You got some good things working here. Is this based on a true story?
Not sure how the nomad soul mate plays into the story. Where does this take place?
See less(Short) A down on his luck and jaded 20 something who robs a bank on Christmas eve meets a little girl who is convinced that an Old Man in the bank is Santa Claus.
You would need to state that he is somehow trapped with the girl, developed a relationship with her and needs her to complete the stake somehow. Kinda farfetched.
You would need to state that he is somehow trapped with the girl, developed a relationship with her and needs her to complete the stake somehow. Kinda farfetched.
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