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  1. Posted: October 4, 2017In: Drama

    Being held responsible for the death of the tiger she took care of, a scared single mother has one chance to save her job as a zookeeper: to tame an untamable tiger.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 4, 2017 at 7:41 am

    Responsible for an ill-fated tiger, a _____ zookeeper has (days/months) to tame a replacement stray or else lose her job and reputation. I fail to see how scared single mom impacts your story enough to logline mention it. Otherwise, interesting premise.

    Responsible for an ill-fated tiger, a _____ zookeeper has (days/months) to tame a replacement stray or else lose her job and reputation.

    I fail to see how scared single mom impacts your story enough to logline mention it.

    Otherwise, interesting premise.

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  2. Posted: October 4, 2017In: Romance

    A mysterious rose causes a tragedy to a teenager?s girlfriend when he gives it to her, and years later tries to make amends by helping find his perfect match. ‘UnMatched Spec script.’

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    Added an answer on October 4, 2017 at 1:52 am

    No typos, I cut and pasted from the original author (my friend).The rose is the magical element from a supernatural garden maintained by an oracle-type of lady who narrates the story of a couple that is torn apart by a supposed accident secretly caused by an overzealous character (rose) and then theRead more

    No typos, I cut and pasted from the original author (my friend).

    The rose is the magical element from a supernatural garden maintained by an oracle-type of lady who narrates the story of a couple that is torn apart by a supposed accident secretly caused by an overzealous character (rose) and then the story resumes later in their lives after the cast of magical icons (cat, bees, etc.) make amends by reuniting the lost relationship of the hopeless couple.

    It combines live characters with digital anime.

    I can see where you have some confusion. “He gives” should probably be changed to “it’s given to her”. And “years later, the ‘rose’ tries to make amends…”

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  3. Posted: October 3, 2017In: Comedy

    To date the girl of his dreams, a romantic peeping Tom enlists the help of a local cat burglar, but her perilous methods put his law-career at risk.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 4, 2017 at 1:26 am

    Lol, dpg. I raised an eyebrow just the same. I even went as far to think that "cat burgler" was a metaphor for stealing the heart of the girl he loves. Cat burglaress? Is that a thing? I picture that hot thief dressed in black from the T-mobile commercials a few years ago.

    Lol, dpg. I raised an eyebrow just the same. I even went as far to think that “cat burgler” was a metaphor for stealing the heart of the girl he loves.

    Cat burglaress? Is that a thing? I picture that hot thief dressed in black from the T-mobile commercials a few years ago.

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