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While digging a murdered girls grave, the church hired hand unearths a bible from 1500 BC and he soon come to grips that it’s the only one written that?has the 11th Commandment and Honor Thy Children and in an instant is transformed to protect all children or die trying.
Considering that this in the action category, it really doesn't suggest any action other than spiritual. Shouldn't the holy experience persuade the hunter to seek justice against the murderous one(s)?
Considering that this in the action category, it really doesn’t suggest any action other than spiritual. Shouldn’t the holy experience persuade the hunter to seek justice against the murderous one(s)?
See lessWhile on vacation, a high-time thief spots a 1000 year-old birchbark canoe where he sets out a plan to do one more heist before he retires and while doing so stumbles across an asian group who will stop at nothing to protect the priceless artifact.
High-time thieves target canoes? Lol
High-time thieves target canoes? Lol
See lessTo date the girl of his dreams, a romantic peeping Tom enlists the help of a local cat burglar, but her perilous methods put his law-career at risk.
Paul, While not bad for a comedy, realise how odd this sounds. A peeping tom enlists a local cat burglar? Did he use craigslist to find the burglar? You would think both should be conspicuous since their activities are illegal. Beyond this obvious setup that you wrote, I fail to see how this peepingRead more
Paul,
While not bad for a comedy, realise how odd this sounds.
A peeping tom enlists a local cat burglar? Did he use craigslist to find the burglar? You would think both should be conspicuous since their activities are illegal.
Beyond this obvious setup that you wrote, I fail to see how this peeping tom constitutes a viable protagonist if his MO is as advertised. He’s law enforcement too? I guess that is comedic relief.
The good news is that you have a ton of interesting and ironic things working for your comedy.
I would assume he falls for the cat burglar instead if his initial target when all is said and done?
A shy “cop” follows the lead of a sexy cat burglar in order to meet the girl of his dreams only to realize that he ultimately lusts that which he cannot have.
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