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In Portland, Oregon there is a house which for the last 130 years has served to maintain the link between two worlds: ours, and the world of The Wondrous. In this immersive, real-world adventure, six players will decide if Wonder is something worth saving.
Agreed, You can't afford an entire line for setup in your log. You must get immediately into the formula rules, even if you risk "dulling" your story. Movie makers know what they are looking for and what they want to film. Sure, if your story is "all the blacklist" rage, then some may be willing toRead more
Agreed,
You can’t afford an entire line for setup in your log. You must get immediately into the formula rules, even if you risk “dulling” your story.
Movie makers know what they are looking for and what they want to film. Sure, if your story is “all the blacklist” rage, then some may be willing to cash in and make your story even if it’s not exactly what they want.
Nail the log now.
See lessAfter being coerced into working for a crime boss, a young getaway driver finds himself taking part in a heist doomed to fail. Baby Driver.
Perfectly explained. Welcome to the insanity that is Hollywood screenwriting. :)
Perfectly explained. Welcome to the insanity that is Hollywood screenwriting. 🙂
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This rogue brutality may have worked a decade or 2 ago, but modern-day police agencies have tons of safeguards in place such as gps, escorting protocols, supervisions and not to mention how much more compensated officers are now -- they won't jeopardize pensions for no reason. Sure there are exceptiRead more
This rogue brutality may have worked a decade or 2 ago, but modern-day police agencies have tons of safeguards in place such as gps, escorting protocols, supervisions and not to mention how much more compensated officers are now — they won’t jeopardize pensions for no reason. Sure there are exceptions. Just a little mention.
Nir has a pretty good template to use. I’d try to ramp up the danger a bit.
Usually, the person being kidnapped should be the active figure who must get themselves out of the mess.
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