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  1. Posted: September 28, 2017In: Drama

    Hostage

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 29, 2017 at 9:45 am

    Grammatical errors make this hard to follow. Harassing is a relatively minor offense, so to say that leads to a kidnapping is vague. If the young cop is the one to root for, how? an that work if he is an accomplice to the other psycho partner? Hard to figure how this progresses logically. Anything fRead more

    Grammatical errors make this hard to follow. Harassing is a relatively minor offense, so to say that leads to a kidnapping is vague.

    If the young cop is the one to root for, how? an that work if he is an accomplice to the other psycho partner?

    Hard to figure how this progresses logically. Anything further?

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  2. Posted: September 27, 2017In: Drama

    When a young successful fashion model suffering from neglect and heartbreak from her lover. She seeks love and comfort from his arch rival for revenge.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 28, 2017 at 2:51 am

    Keeks, These are incomplete sentences as is. A? hearbroken woman hooks up with her ex's rival to seek revenge, but later learns... I hope you have an ironic arc awaiting this woman down the road or she realizes how to become a better person in the end. Can you provide more info about the plot?

    Keeks,

    These are incomplete sentences as is.

    A? hearbroken woman hooks up with her ex’s rival to seek revenge, but later learns…

    I hope you have an ironic arc awaiting this woman down the road or she realizes how to become a better person in the end.

    Can you provide more info about the plot?

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2017In: Comedy

    A self-centered man, doubting his relationship with his girlfriend, finds a way to jump through dimensions to find the woman he believes was ?the one,? but risks collapsing the entire multiverse before he finds her.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 28, 2017 at 2:43 am

    Hyperion,This lacks clarity as written. Recommend you break this down into the 3 basic elements and begin again.Also, you have this as a comedy, yet aren't touching on anything comedic.A man risks a universal catastrophe by entering a dimensional portal in search of a girl that he believes to be hisRead more

    Hyperion,

    This lacks clarity as written. Recommend you break this down into the 3 basic elements and begin again.

    Also, you have this as a comedy, yet aren’t touching on anything comedic.

    A man risks a universal catastrophe by entering a dimensional portal in search of a girl that he believes to be his true love.

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