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When a young party-girl?s father is framed and imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him and fool social services into believing she?s responsible enough to care for her little brother.
I wouldn't reveal the "framed and imprisoned" part in the logline, but rather begin with... A young daughter must somehow care for her little brother while their father faces life in prison. or something more general about the task at hand. That's? pretty daunting and powerful without giving away muRead more
I wouldn’t reveal the “framed and imprisoned” part in the logline, but rather begin with…
A young daughter must somehow care for her little brother while their father faces life in prison.
or something more general about the task at hand. That’s? pretty daunting and powerful without giving away much and staying lean at 17 words.
See lessWhen an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.
The last thing a logline should be to a general audience is confusing. What is at stake to him, identifying with God? Sounds too general of a topic. Doesn't everyone struggle to maintain this throughout life? The antagonistic force should come from another person's faith, no? I hear of callings forRead more
The last thing a logline should be to a general audience is confusing.
What is at stake to him, identifying with God? Sounds too general of a topic. Doesn’t everyone struggle to maintain this throughout life? The antagonistic force should come from another person’s faith, no?
I hear of callings for faith-based work, so good luck ironing this out.
Recommend starting with: A man tests his faith when…
See lessA inflexible stoic self-disciplined detective has trust issues due to a traumatic past making moving forward in life an obstacle.
Most people seem to struggle with describing their MC even briefly. You are the flip side, over describing. As dpg and Craig suggest, let's try to boil down what your story is. You say romance, so perhaps mention the other party involved and what's unique about their get together.
Most people seem to struggle with describing their MC even briefly. You are the flip side, over describing.
As dpg and Craig suggest, let’s try to boil down what your story is. You say romance, so perhaps mention the other party involved and what’s unique about their get together.
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