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  1. Posted: June 23, 2013In: Public

    Three friends become entangled in a series of mind games as they argue over what they should do when a local Sheriff comes looking for the woman they find murdered in their isolated cabin

    FreelanceLance
    Added an answer on June 23, 2013 at 3:42 pm

    Nice (re: the edit button)...I had meant to mention in my previous reply. That detective coming looking sounds like an important detail, and adds that extra "kick" and element of danger/intrigue. (And lets us know this isn't just 100% three guys in a cabin.)

    Nice (re: the edit button)…I had meant to mention in my previous reply.

    That detective coming looking sounds like an important detail, and adds that extra “kick” and element of danger/intrigue. (And lets us know this isn’t just 100% three guys in a cabin.)

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2013In: Public

    Three friends become entangled in a series of mind games as they argue over what they should do when a local Sheriff comes looking for the woman they find murdered in their isolated cabin

    FreelanceLance
    Added an answer on June 23, 2013 at 3:38 pm

    You don't need to reveal the thing itself, you just need to (ideally cleverly or intriguingly) let us know that there is a thing...something that makes this a story we haven't seen before. (Because we have seen "mindgame-between-friends thriller" before.)

    You don’t need to reveal the thing itself, you just need to (ideally cleverly or intriguingly) let us know that there is a thing…something that makes this a story we haven’t seen before. (Because we have seen “mindgame-between-friends thriller” before.)

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2013In: Public

    Three friends become entangled in a series of mind games as they argue over what they should do when a local Sheriff comes looking for the woman they find murdered in their isolated cabin

    FreelanceLance
    Added an answer on June 23, 2013 at 3:25 pm

    ...or a hint at the location/atmosphere/world that we will be seeing. (Again, is this a small cabin-based psychological thriller, or a The Usual Suspects-type manipulation yarn...are there action elements? Does it get big? I know the plot kind of, but I don't really get the tone or the world from thRead more

    …or a hint at the location/atmosphere/world that we will be seeing. (Again, is this a small cabin-based psychological thriller, or a The Usual Suspects-type manipulation yarn…are there action elements? Does it get big? I know the plot kind of, but I don’t really get the tone or the world from the logline.

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