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  1. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    ?When Sam Blake, the best hitman in the US, wants to retire and right his wrongs, he will have to do what he swore he would never do again.?

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    Added an answer on May 21, 2013 at 8:14 am

    ***REVISION*** When Sam Blake, a successful hitman, discovers he has a fatal disease he vows to never kill an innocent person again, but the only way a hitman retires is to sign The Agenda, a list of targets, and compete against other hitmen to see who can rack up the most kills so Sam decides to elRead more

    ***REVISION***

    When Sam Blake, a successful hitman, discovers he has a fatal disease he vows to never kill an innocent person again, but the only way a hitman retires is to sign The Agenda, a list of targets, and compete against other hitmen to see who can rack up the most kills so Sam decides to eliminate the competition.

    ***REVISION***

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  2. Posted: June 8, 2012In: Public

    Shaming his family whilst alive is nothing compared to what they have to overcome now that Lee's dead and unwed.

    KnowledgeKnight
    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 3:54 pm

    it needs to be clear, after i read it I had no idea what it was about or the strycture. I recommend going to the "write it" section at the top of the page.

    it needs to be clear, after i read it I had no idea what it was about or the strycture. I recommend going to the “write it” section at the top of the page.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    A tough, feared gangster embarks on a rampage of killing to avenge his murdered son. But when his obsession for justice steals his presence from the rest of his family, he's forced to choose between avenging his son, or saving the family he loves.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 2:59 pm

    The mix between action and drama is almost always a good combo in my opinion and I think this idea is a good one. The plot sounds like it could have something for everyone. He is torn between two choices. My advice, make it a little more complicated than black and white. Spice things up. Its a decenRead more

    The mix between action and drama is almost always a good combo in my opinion and I think this idea is a good one. The plot sounds like it could have something for everyone. He is torn between two choices. My advice, make it a little more complicated than black and white. Spice things up. Its a decent idea though. Good luck.

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