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After his wife commits adultery , a proud South African farmer feels ostracized by his community and forms a codependent relationship with a French anarchistic cult couple that eventually turn violent on him and his family, but his fight for survival comes at tragic cost and he is confronted by the depths of his shame.
When an ostracized farmer teams up with two strangers, his impulsive actions threaten his farm as he is drawn into a destructive killing spree in a small rural community.
When an ostracized farmer teams up with two strangers, his impulsive actions threaten his farm as he is drawn into a destructive killing spree in a small rural community.
See lessAn adventurous wheelchair-bound woman drags her hyper-cautious cousin and friends into the outback to test off-road wheelchairs, but they encounter killer kangaroos with a taste for human flesh.
I like the killer kangaroo twist. This is in essence a 'Monster In the House' film (per Blake Snyder's genres). You nailed two of the three essential ingredients: a house and a supernatural monster. Your house is the outback and the supernatural monster is of course your kangaroos. What is missing iRead more
I like the killer kangaroo twist.
This is in essence a ‘Monster In the House’ film (per Blake Snyder’s genres). You nailed two of the three essential ingredients: a house and a supernatural monster. Your house is the outback and the supernatural monster is of course your kangaroos. What is missing is a sin. Something like greed in JAWS when the town officials plan to keep the beaches open during the profitable tourist season and their retribution is the killer shark.
My suggestion is to introduce a sin. Maybe the buddies who go to the outback are rowdy beer guzzlers, and they are developing the off-road wheelchair to go out and tear up the environment on drunken binges. Or maybe some form of corporate greed.
The idea is that the Kangaroos provide a form of comeuppance for the sins of the group. Nothing to heavy-handed, just an extra thread to round out the story.
Good job.
See lessWhen a policeman is murdered by a bikie gang, a disguised woman tries to dispose of the body, but she must convince the drug addicted pilot of her crashed plane, to hide the body before they can be rescued.
Not sure what is the inciting incident - the one thing that starts the story. Is it the murder of the policeman? The woman disposing the body? Or the woman convincing the pilot to hide a body? After that is sorted out. Who is the MC? The pilot or the woman? What is she or he is trying to do? Get resRead more
Not sure what is the inciting incident – the one thing that starts the story. Is it the murder of the policeman? The woman disposing the body? Or the woman convincing the pilot to hide a body?
After that is sorted out. Who is the MC? The pilot or the woman? What is she or he is trying to do? Get rescued? Wouldn’t any plane crash bring resuers on the scene?
The pieces don’t connect to produce a coherent story. I think you meant:
“After a woman murders a policeman she must hide the body in order to avoid going to jail.” (18 words)
Isn’t that any crime story? I think you are hiding the ball.
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