1. Posted: August 27, 2015In:

    An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.

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    Seems like the story is the following: After a forger receives irrefutable evidence from an anonymous source implicating her in her husband's murder, she is forced to copy one more masterpiece, while searching for husband's real murderer.

    Seems like the story is the following:

    After a forger receives irrefutable evidence from an anonymous source implicating her in her husband’s murder, she is forced to copy one more masterpiece, while searching for husband’s real murderer.

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2015In:

    On the eve of his gay uncle?s anniversary dinner, Marcus must again struggle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family.

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    Why now? What's his goal? Why is it going to be difficult to achieve? No need for first names, "an alcoholic" is a better description for the MC, unless Marcus is someone we know.

    Why now? What’s his goal? Why is it going to be difficult to achieve?

    No need for first names, “an alcoholic” is a better description for the MC, unless Marcus is someone we know.

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  3. Posted: August 25, 2015In:

    After tipping off police to his brother’s latest heist, a torn man must struggle to escape the consequences while keeping the loot; but when his brother is released on bail, he must learn where his true loyalty lies before losing the people most dear to him.

    Frugal Writer Penpusher

    46 words is bit wordy for a story that is in essence: After turning in his brother to the police, an informant tries to keep the loot and hide from his bailed-out brother. (22 words)

    46 words is bit wordy for a story that is in essence:

    After turning in his brother to the police, an informant tries to keep the loot and hide from his bailed-out brother. (22 words)

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