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  1. Posted: March 31, 2015In: Public

    Two best friends with Down Syndrome are ecstatic to discover that they have been selected to test Hoogle?s new technology: the Hoogle Hat. But when the hat seems to brainwash the other test subjects, they realize that they are the only people who can stop Hoogle from taking over the world.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2015 at 4:36 am

    Okay very helpful again. How about this: When a depressed young man with Down Syndrome meets someone online looking for subjects to test his ?cure? on, he enlists the help of his best friend to travel to Florida with the hopes of finding a cure.

    Okay very helpful again. How about this:

    When a depressed young man with Down Syndrome meets someone online looking for subjects to test his ?cure? on, he enlists the help of his best friend to travel to Florida with the hopes of finding a cure.

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2015In: Public

    Two best friends with Down Syndrome are ecstatic to discover that they have been selected to test Hoogle?s new technology: the Hoogle Hat. But when the hat seems to brainwash the other test subjects, they realize that they are the only people who can stop Hoogle from taking over the world.

    gdawg23
    Added an answer on April 8, 2015 at 7:06 am

    Okay these notes have been very helpful. Worked on it a bit more today with all of your notes in mind and this is what I came up with: After a biotechnology company announces they will be testing a new form of gene therapy, two adversarial classmates team up in an attempt to be a part of the study:Read more

    Okay these notes have been very helpful. Worked on it a bit more today with all of your notes in mind and this is what I came up with:

    After a biotechnology company announces they will be testing a new form of gene therapy, two adversarial classmates team up in an attempt to be a part of the study: one with the hopes of curing his Down Syndrome and the other with the goal of exposing the company to the world as evil.

    Thoughts??

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  3. Posted: January 16, 2015In: Public

    In a secret facility, a headstrong computer scientist developing microchips implanted in the brains of test animals fears that she might be a subject in a similar experiment on humans.

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    Added an answer on January 17, 2015 at 1:57 am

    Hey all this is extremely helpful! Galgamesh you are exactly right that this is in line with The Conversation, The Game, also Shutter Island. The inciting incident: She is recruited to replace the lead engineer on the team. Her goal: She is ambitious. She wants to be known for creating a technologyRead more

    Hey all this is extremely helpful! Galgamesh you are exactly right that this is in line with The Conversation, The Game, also Shutter Island.

    The inciting incident: She is recruited to replace the lead engineer on the team.
    Her goal: She is ambitious. She wants to be known for creating a technology that revolutionizes the human race.

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    An ambitious computer-scientist is recruited to lead a team developing revolutionary microchips tested in the brains of animals. But a series of cryptic visions cause her to fear that she is a subject in the experiment.

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