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  1. Posted: December 18, 2013In: Public

    In dystopian future governed by a biotechnology corporation, a young woman?s investigation into her father?s sudden disappearance leads her to believe he is a test-subject in a secret government location called ?The Factory?. When she finds herself with a group of prisoners on a vehicle heading towards an unknown location, she realizes she is on her way to The Factory and must find her father and escape before they are changed forever.

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    Added an answer on December 19, 2013 at 7:15 am

    Very helpful. Thank you. In a dystopian future, a young woman discovers her father has been kidnapped into a government program that genetically modifies enemies of the state. Now she must find her father and escape before they are both changed forever. 38 words!!

    Very helpful. Thank you.

    In a dystopian future, a young woman discovers her father has been kidnapped into a government program that genetically modifies enemies of the state. Now she must find her father and escape before they are both changed forever.

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  2. Posted: December 18, 2013In: Public

    In dystopian future governed by a biotechnology corporation, a young woman?s investigation into her father?s sudden disappearance leads her to believe he is a test-subject in a secret government location called ?The Factory?. When she finds herself with a group of prisoners on a vehicle heading towards an unknown location, she realizes she is on her way to The Factory and must find her father and escape before they are changed forever.

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    Added an answer on December 19, 2013 at 5:50 am

    That is very helpful and may indicate a problem in my overall story. I want her to discover what happened to her father and THEN be kidnapped into the same experiment and need to find her father and escape with him... but maybe that doesn't make her active enough. Here is a new stab at it, but it doRead more

    That is very helpful and may indicate a problem in my overall story. I want her to discover what happened to her father and THEN be kidnapped into the same experiment and need to find her father and escape with him… but maybe that doesn’t make her active enough.

    Here is a new stab at it, but it doesn’t necessarily address everything you have mentioned. What do you think?

    In dystopian future governed by a biotechnology corporation, a young woman?s investigation into her father?s sudden disappearance leads her to believe he is a test-subject in a horrifying government conspiracy that takes political prisoners and turns them into genetically modified super-soldiers. When she is kidnapped for the experiment herself, she must find her father and escape before they are changed forever.

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