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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Essentially she is trying to develop this new form of energy storage, working on this isolated wind farm. She encounters this ominous force (while she is driving her car to the windfarm during the stor an Unidentified Flying Object flies over the car she is in with her co-working, causing her to havRead more
Essentially she is trying to develop this new form of energy storage, working on this isolated wind farm. She encounters this ominous force (while she is driving her car to the windfarm during the stor an Unidentified Flying Object flies over the car she is in with her co-working, causing her to have an intense vision, and car accident). The “alien vision” unlocks her research (points her a new exciting direction) (positive beginning of Act 2), but at the same time she begins to suspect that her co-worker who was in the car with her has been replaced by an alien imposter, and she continues to have visions and debilitating headaches, etc.
Oh in terms of the stakes: she feels the world is on the brink of disaster in terms of our use of energy, and that in order to save the world we need to figure out how to store energy better because we have the ability to create sustainable energy through wind, but we can’t store it. The character and idea is based slightly on this: http://www.nantucketproject.com/danielle_fong_a_time_for_urgency
Notice the urgency, etc.
So as you can see, a lot of information here but I don’t think it all needs to fit into the logline… just not sure what to put in and what not. Any help there?
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Essentially she is trying to develop this new form of energy storage, working on this isolated wind farm. She encounters this ominous force (while she is driving her car to the windfarm during the stor an Unidentified Flying Object flies over the car she is in with her co-working, causing her to havRead more
Essentially she is trying to develop this new form of energy storage, working on this isolated wind farm. She encounters this ominous force (while she is driving her car to the windfarm during the stor an Unidentified Flying Object flies over the car she is in with her co-working, causing her to have an intense vision, and car accident). The “alien vision” unlocks her research (points her a new exciting direction) (positive beginning of Act 2), but at the same time she begins to suspect that her co-worker who was in the car with her has been replaced by an alien imposter, and she continues to have visions and debilitating headaches, etc.
Oh in terms of the stakes: she feels the world is on the brink of disaster in terms of our use of energy, and that in order to save the world we need to figure out how to store energy better because we have the ability to create sustainable energy through wind, but we can’t store it. The character and idea is based slightly on this: http://www.nantucketproject.com/danielle_fong_a_time_for_urgency
Notice the urgency, etc.
So as you can see, a lot of information here but I don’t think it all needs to fit into the logline… just not sure what to put in and what not. Any help there?
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Okay this is great advice. New log line: "During a ferocious storm on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario, a headstrong engineer encounters an ominous force changing the course of her research and mental state, forever." I'm wondering though, does this log line have enough of her goal in it, wRead more
Okay this is great advice.
New log line:
“During a ferocious storm on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario, a headstrong engineer encounters an ominous force changing the course of her research and mental state, forever.”
I’m wondering though, does this log line have enough of her goal in it, which is to develop a new form of renewable energy storage? Perhaps I don’t need to get specific and “research” as the goal is enough… What do you guys think?
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