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  1. Posted: October 8, 2023In: Drama

    A young corporate suffers a breakdown that links him to a traditional religion that destroyed his culture. He must overcome an internal conflict and re-discover his spiritual faith so that his identity isn’t diminished forever.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 9, 2023 at 11:32 pm

    It's not clear what "breakdown that links him" means. Can you make things more specific, because I don't get what exactly is going on. "Internal conflict," "identity [is] diminished," etc are very vague terms.

    It’s not clear what “breakdown that links him” means. Can you make things more specific, because I don’t get what exactly is going on. “Internal conflict,” “identity [is] diminished,” etc are very vague terms.

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  2. Posted: September 21, 2020In: Examples

    An immortal alien race must come out of hiding on earth and reunite, when an ancient enemy threatens humanity.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 5:54 am

    I see this is posted under the "Examples" category. Is it an existing movie, then? Which one?

    I see this is posted under the “Examples” category. Is it an existing movie, then? Which one?

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  3. Posted: September 23, 2020In: Drama

    After being bullied because of her autism, a misunderstood college student joins a secret sorority group of girls only to find out she has a kill a fellow student.

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    Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 5:51 am

    The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is "The Killing of a Chinese Bookie" by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia. What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow studentRead more

    The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is “The Killing of a Chinese Bookie” by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia.

    What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow student or what? What’s stopping her from reporting the sorority as a crime organisation? Her autism? Is this realistic?

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