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  1. Posted: November 11, 2012In: Public

    An idealistic priest is hunted by Church agents after he uncovers a plot to release a virus that targets non believers.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 11, 2012 at 7:49 pm

    The anti-virus is administered via Communion. Some people would naturally be immune and, if not devout, be hunted down and killed to allow no accidental access to a serum.

    The anti-virus is administered via Communion. Some people would naturally be immune and, if not devout, be hunted down and killed to allow no accidental access to a serum.

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  2. Posted: November 5, 2012In: Public

    An insecure process server, becomes the target of a serial killer, and teams u with a private investigator to catch the killer and regain his self confidence.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 5, 2012 at 6:34 am

    Neat one liner but contains too many elements. Serial killer's target, private investigator, catch the killer, regain self confidence. Which one is the important one? In which order do they go? Two goals- catch the killer and regain self confidence, and two set ups- target of the serial killer and tRead more

    Neat one liner but contains too many elements. Serial killer’s target, private investigator, catch the killer, regain self confidence. Which one is the important one? In which order do they go? Two goals- catch the killer and regain self confidence, and two set ups- target of the serial killer and teams up with a private investigator. Less is more- “An insecure process server regains his self confidence after teaming up with a private investigator to catch a serial killer.”?

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2012In: Public

    A frazzled man's secret lives are set to collide when he discovers his wife has invited everyone he knows to his surprise 40th birthday.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 6:42 pm

    First off, I take issue with Screenwriters Anonymous suggesting 40 is over the hill! ;-) On a more serious note, I see a conundrum here. If he has secret lives then presumably his wife wouldn't know the people involved or, if she does, then they would be in on the secret and not give anything away.Read more

    First off, I take issue with Screenwriters Anonymous suggesting 40 is over the hill! 😉 On a more serious note, I see a conundrum here. If he has secret lives then presumably his wife wouldn’t know the people involved or, if she does, then they would be in on the secret and not give anything away. So maybe the story is that the wife has found out and that the surprise?

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