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  1. Posted: November 1, 2012In: Public

    There is a company that can reset your life. If you don't feel like you have succeed in life you can just reset your life.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 6:25 pm

    To me it sounds like a public version of The Adjustment Bureau. That's not to say it wouldn't work but, as has been said before, the logline isn't giving us much beyond the idea. "On deciding to reset his life, an under-achieving patent office worker discovers the mysterious Reset Company who, in exRead more

    To me it sounds like a public version of The Adjustment Bureau. That’s not to say it wouldn’t work but, as has been said before, the logline isn’t giving us much beyond the idea. “On deciding to reset his life, an under-achieving patent office worker discovers the mysterious Reset Company who, in exchange for his sense of sartorial elegance, allow Albert to develop the Theory of Relativity thus propelling him onto the World stage”. I’m messing obviously, but the gist is there.

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  2. Posted: November 3, 2012In: Public

    After being accused of murder, a naive woman must overcome fear and flee her sheltered world in search of the truth, only to discover she may be the worlds greatest assassin.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 12:59 am

    Intriguing stuff. I'm not sure the overcoming fear bit is actually necessary though, it's a bit vague to me. Why not call her a 'fearful' woman and cover her naiivit? with that as well? Just from this one liner though, I'd watch it!

    Intriguing stuff. I’m not sure the overcoming fear bit is actually necessary though, it’s a bit vague to me. Why not call her a ‘fearful’ woman and cover her naiivit? with that as well? Just from this one liner though, I’d watch it!

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  3. Posted: November 3, 2012In: Public

    A drug dependent father finds himself part of an epic battle against a demonic legion and is joined in the fight by a time traveler from the future as he learns the fate of the world lies within the mind of his autistic child.

    GriffUK
    Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 12:49 am

    Sounds like an epic battle indeed, but there seem to be too many elements and as such I can't decide which is the most important. How about missing out the bit about a time traveller, interesting as it is, to focus on the father and son? "A drug dependant father protects his autistic son against a dRead more

    Sounds like an epic battle indeed, but there seem to be too many elements and as such I can’t decide which is the most important. How about missing out the bit about a time traveller, interesting as it is, to focus on the father and son? “A drug dependant father protects his autistic son against a demonic legion as he discovers the fate of the world lies within the boy’s mind”.

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