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  1. Posted: May 28, 2012In: Public

    A drug addict and a businessman come together through their joint love of music, and become increasingly dependant on each other.

    holbrook99
    Added an answer on November 1, 2012 at 1:05 am

    Not been here for a while but here is the updated logline: A business man and a drug addict form a close bond after a chance meeting, and a mutual love for music. When their usual mundane lives begin to crumble around them, they begin to rely on each other for guidance as they eventually start chasiRead more

    Not been here for a while but here is the updated logline:

    A business man and a drug addict form a close bond after a chance meeting, and a mutual love for music. When their usual mundane lives begin to crumble around them, they begin to rely on each other for guidance as they eventually start chasing their dreams.

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2012In: Public

    Peter has an over active imagination and takes it upon himself to seek out and banish the beasts that he hears his mother describe, only to discover that in fact they are not beasts at all.

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    Added an answer on August 9, 2012 at 7:52 pm

    He is a child. It's about a child learning about being two-faced...So when he hears his mother 'describing' her friends, he takes her descriptions quite literally, so he see's these people as various monsters, and decides to go on a 'quest' to track down, and banish the beasts. When he meets the peoRead more

    He is a child. It’s about a child learning about being two-faced…So when he hears his mother ‘describing’ her friends, he takes her descriptions quite literally, so he see’s these people as various monsters, and decides to go on a ‘quest’ to track down, and banish the beasts. When he meets the people in person, each in turn, he becomes more and more confused as they are in fact kindhearted people, with each meeting he begins to see his mother for what she is…Two-faced. Of course, with Peters imagination, he see’s his mother as a beast with two faces.

    Hope that makes sense

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  3. Posted: August 8, 2012In: Public

    Gale and his family have had to flee their previous life to start again in New Mexico. Gale's troubled son Tommy steals from a local drug baron and when Gale's family are tormented and threatened, Gale erupts into action, and protecting his family is something he is VERY good at.

    holbrook99
    Added an answer on August 9, 2012 at 12:00 am

    Reading this back, it really is far too long... "Gale moves his family to the isolated town of El Roto, New Mexico and is forced into action when the local psychopath begins to terrorise and torment his family."

    Reading this back, it really is far too long…

    “Gale moves his family to the isolated town of El Roto, New Mexico and is forced into action when the local psychopath begins to terrorise and torment his family.”

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