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  1. Posted: March 17, 2015In: Public

    In 'Found Photos' style, a pair of Google Street View car drivers unknowingly take a photo of a dangerous cult performing a ritualistic killing in a remote field and are pursued by them. Detectives are left with an abandoned car and a series of mysterious photos in order to find the pair before it's too late. (Inspired by these types of lists – http://www.viralnova.com/creepiest-things-on-google-maps/

    Houston Chorley Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 4:45 pm

    it seems like you have two protagonists. The cop which makes it a crime thriller. The driver which makes it a horror if the majority of the script is about escaping. When a driver for google maps uncovers a cult, he is pursed and captured by them. He must escape if he ever wants to see google maps aRead more

    it seems like you have two protagonists. The cop which makes it a crime thriller. The driver which makes it a horror if the majority of the script is about escaping.
    When a driver for google maps uncovers a cult, he is pursed and captured by them. He must escape if he ever wants to see google maps again……

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  2. Posted: March 17, 2015In: Public

    Renee must convince her group to stick to the plan in a future reality show where people die and the only reward is survival.

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    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Sounds very much like hunger games. What is your Inciting incident? Who is Renee? These will give it more personality then just being the run of the mill dystopian reality show. Remembering that battle royale, running man, the condemned, gamer and hunger games are all similar plots. I want to know wRead more

    Sounds very much like hunger games. What is your Inciting incident? Who is Renee? These will give it more personality then just being the run of the mill dystopian reality show. Remembering that battle royale, running man, the condemned, gamer and hunger games are all similar plots. I want to know what makes this different.

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  3. Posted: March 15, 2015In: Public

    When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.

    Houston Chorley Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 17, 2015 at 12:07 pm

    Hi Nir, I think the Inciting Incident is the father's stroke, because with out the stroke she doesn't return home and there is no need to save the farm. Her major character flaw: is her inability to lead. She must be the one to lead this team to victory. these are list possible flaws I think she hasRead more

    Hi Nir, I think the Inciting Incident is the father’s stroke, because with out the stroke she doesn’t return home and there is no need to save the farm.

    Her major character flaw: is her inability to lead. She must be the one to lead this team to victory.

    these are list possible flaws I think she has.

    Day dreamer, shy, complacent, insecure, irresponsible.

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