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  1. Posted: March 15, 2015In: Public

    When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.

    Houston Chorley Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 8:44 pm

    When a video gamer returns home to care for her estranged bedridden father, She must gather a team of misfits to win a video game tournament to save her father farm from foreclosure.

    When a video gamer returns home to care for her estranged bedridden father, She must gather a team of misfits to win a video game tournament to save her father farm from foreclosure.

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  2. Posted: March 15, 2015In: Public

    When an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.

    Houston Chorley Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 8:18 pm

    Hey guys thanks for the critiquing The idea in my head at the moment is. She has been separated for her father through divorce. He has a stroke that injures him and thats what makes her come back to care for him. Originally she was going to be reluctant to compete, but through the comments I think mRead more

    Hey guys thanks for the critiquing The idea in my head at the moment is. She has been separated for her father through divorce. He has a stroke that injures him and thats what makes her come back to care for him. Originally she was going to be reluctant to compete, but through the comments I think maybe she should be active and trying to make a team. to compete.

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  3. Posted: March 9, 2015In: Public

    When the troubled son of a wealthy business CEO falls into heavy heroin abuse, he is taken care of J05HU4, an A.I. who is to help his son come off his heroin addiction only to relate to him during his withdrawals that evolves J05HU4 in the process.

    Houston Chorley Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 15, 2015 at 10:43 pm

    So I see the MC as the Son so why not. "The wealthy heir" or " A rich heroin addict must kick his habit with the help of Jo5hu4.... I suppose the Inciting incident must be where he crosses the line from just destroying his life to almost/destroying someone else's. because it sounds like he has beenRead more

    So I see the MC as the Son so why not. “The wealthy heir” or ” A rich heroin addict must kick his habit with the help of Jo5hu4…. I suppose the Inciting incident must be where he crosses the line from just destroying his life to almost/destroying someone else’s. because it sounds like he has been an addict before we meet him. That also makes for a hard character to like.

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