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Inorder to Save and Marry his Indian Girlfriend who is getting arranged Married, An American Highschool teacher is being tricked by his Indian Student and Colleagues plans & Kidnaps his Girlfriend from her Strict Cultural Family
The flow is disjointed in several places and many words have been unnecessarily capitalised. Having the twist of being tricked mid sentence could be amplified if it went closer to the end, thus building intrigue. A possible edit could be: In order to save his Indian girlfriend from an imminent arranRead more
The flow is disjointed in several places and many words have been unnecessarily capitalised. Having the twist of being tricked mid sentence could be amplified if it went closer to the end, thus building intrigue.
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In order to save his Indian girlfriend from an imminent arranged marriage, an American high school teacher plans to kidnap his girlfriend from her strict cultural family, only to find he has been tricked by his Indian student and colleagues.
When an adventurous lone hunter is lost to the river gorges, chasing a mysterious man or beast known as the Bunyip, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his disappearance.
Edit: When an adventurous lone hunter, chasing an elusive man or beast, locally known as the Bunyip, is tragically lost to the river gorges, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his untimely disappearance.
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See lessWhen an adventurous lone hunter, chasing an elusive man or beast, locally known as the Bunyip, is tragically lost to the river gorges, his grieving family and friends must pick up the pieces and discover the truth about his untimely disappearance.
After a series of volcanic explosions and earthquakes unleashes the 'Shaadowars', a race of monsters born from the depths of the world. The human race who inhabits the world has waged a brutal war for survival. An Australian Knight unsuspectingly teams up with a young Aboriginal boy who has the key to ending the devastating war and drag the world back from darkness.
Yes there are knights in Australia... sadly enough. The current Prime Minister brought the archaic system back last year and we now have several knights and dames chosen solely by him... one of which isn't actually in Australia! sigh... there's a story in that alone I guess!
Yes there are knights in Australia… sadly enough. The current Prime Minister brought the archaic system back last year and we now have several knights and dames chosen solely by him… one of which isn’t actually in Australia!
sigh… there’s a story in that alone I guess!
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