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For years, something has lurked in the rugged gorges of the river country, Australia; terrifying, injuring or killing those who venture too deep, but when one man manages to escape with his life, he sets off a dramatic chain of events that will ultimately reveal the hidden truth.
Many thanks to FFF, dpg and Nir Shelter. All your comments have been taken on board. I see what you mean... I think... I have a difficult aspect of my story in that I am trying to lead the reader into a thinking one thing and then discovering another. So, how to write a logline that does not betrayRead more
Many thanks to FFF, dpg and Nir Shelter.
All your comments have been taken on board.
I see what you mean… I think…
I have a difficult aspect of my story in that I am trying to lead the reader into a thinking one thing and then discovering another. So, how to write a logline that does not betray that is proving to be super, super difficult!
sigh!
try, try again 🙂
See lessWhen two unlucky brothers are unable to pay off their dead father’s debt, they must fight against the Irish Mafia and the corrupt policemen who control the streets of Boston to protect their lives and take down the oldest organized crime group in the United States.
One suggested alternative without knowing the story, based on Nir's comments: When two brothers miss the deadline to pay off their dead father?s debt, they must fight against the Irish Mafia plus corrupt police who control the streets of Boston to ultimately dismantle the oldest organized crime grouRead more
One suggested alternative without knowing the story, based on Nir’s comments:
When two brothers miss the deadline to pay off their dead father?s debt, they must fight against the Irish Mafia plus corrupt police who control the streets of Boston to ultimately dismantle the oldest organized crime group in the United States or die trying.
See lessAn inexperienced yet aspiring screenwriter, with an industry record of absolute failure in logline creation must defeat his greatest adversary, himself, and surpass with his last entry the infallible scrutiny of the top tier, professional reviewers of the "Logline.it!" website's as "A million dollars for The Perfect Logline Contest" deadline draws to a close in one minute.
Love it. A little long winded and requiring some punctuation to make it read more smoothly, but otherwise it managed to draw out a real lol and a broad grin. Keep up the good work.
Love it.
See lessA little long winded and requiring some punctuation to make it read more smoothly, but otherwise it managed to draw out a real lol and a broad grin.
Keep up the good work.